Thursday, July 27, 2017

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Poem: Somewhere Over the Rooftops


Quote of the day: 

A dream is the bearer of a new possibility, the enlarged horizon, the great hope. -Howard Thurman







Somewhere within the delicate sky
The sun lay in ruins
Held down by the darkest of clouds
A vengeance for being too pleasant

Somewhere in your heart
A path worth pursuing
Obscured by solemn victory
An aftermath of idle disenchantment

Somewhere in this world
Over towering rooftops
Beyond the wings of horizon
A quelling of dreams in vain

Somewhere within the twilight
The tide began to wane
Freed from the tempest of love

A calmness too salient to ignore


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This poem was written in free verse thereby observing no known structure, rhyme or scheme. It is an open form of poetry with no metre patterns. It merely follows natural speech and was written on the go. This form is a continuation of my goal to write outside my known comfort zone.

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39 comments:

  1. Nice poem. Have a great weekend.

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    1. I am glad you found it so. Thank you for visiting and have a good one!

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  2. Beautiful poem, perfectly consistent with the pic! :)
    XO
    S
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    1. Many thanks indeed, and appreciate your comment and visit.

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  3. Lovely quote, beautiful pic, and great poem!
    Love, Paola.
    Expressyourself

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    1. Its great that you found it so, thank you and greetings!

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  4. Free Verse is one of my favorite forms. Lovely!

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    1. Its interesting isn't it? I think its a great form. Nice of you to stop by again, thank you!

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  5. Hola, hermoso poema y hermosa foto. Saludos.

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  6. Hello, wonderful poem. Kudos to you for going outside your comfort zone. Happy Thursday, enjoy your day and the weekend ahead.

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  7. Beautiful poem...thanks for sharing xx

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  8. i enjoy your writing style. going to check out your tune selection ... i always enjoy that! ( ;
    have a great day.

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  9. The poem is a beautiful expression of letting optimism shine through.

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  10. Beautiful, I love that you are free not bound by structure here.

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  11. Some very beautiful imagery in your poem.

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  12. I like how you have different ways of writing poetry. : )

    ~Sheri

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  13. Lovely. Thank you for taking our imagination on this journey.

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  14. Well, I quite think you've found a new comfort zone ;).
    This was lovely.

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  15. I liked it very much. You are a person of many talents.
    :)

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  16. Lovely poem. Somewhere in my heart, there is a path worth pursuing. Yeah. :)

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  17. A vengeance for being too pleasant....... something akin to today's world.

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  19. I had forgotten your talent for expression. Well done, wish I could write like this.

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  20. When you let the thoughts and words flow, it is beautiful.

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  21. Nicely done indeed, as we can push and see what comes on through in life.

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  22. Beyond the wings of horizon
    A quelling of dreams in vain

    So much hopes but too little in terms of commitments

    Hank

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  23. Very beautiful. I've enjoyed visiting your blog and learning more about you. You are so creative...and that's what I'm trying to encourage in myself! Enjoy your weekend!

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  24. The poem is a beautiful expression of letting optimism shine through.


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  25. It seems like all the good is going away in this poem. Its a great poem but a little sad. :) Erika

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  26. Lovely words, Blogoratti, but definitely with a sad tone. Writing poetry would be way outside my comfort zone!

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  27. Somewhere, over the rooftop, / way up high. / There's a love / that I so want / It makes my heart cr. Published at the web's largest poetry site.
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