Quote of the day:
I dreamed I was a butterfly, flitting around in the sky; then I awoke. Now I wonder: Am I a man who dreamt of being a butterfly, or am I a butterfly dreaming that I am a man? -Zhuangzi
image: DeviantArt/Kev-kills
I gasped as the cold winds brushed.
Against my face.
Like a painter's stroke.
On a blank canvass.
I watched leaves detach from trees.
Like thieves escaping from crime scenes.
I hear violin strings or maybe a mandolin?
I can picture the fiddlers playing with ease.
Like A.B.C.'s deep inside a symphony...
...Orchestra, two acts conjoined like Siamese.
I'm fulfilled with their striking expertise.
Its like crossing the seven seas.
I close my eyes and take it all in.
I transport back to the present.
I circumvent my emotions.
Contentment and resentment.
Calmness prevails. No more winds.
I opened my eyes to my painted thoughts.
I start afresh, I've given myself a new lease.
A blank canvas replaced with a masterpiece.
Peace. Love. Serenity*
Current Listen: Dave Brubeck -Take Five
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Striking imagery. I love how after the artistic storm the poet awakens to their masterpiece complete. You are a talented poet for sure!
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What a lovely poem. Starts out with the cold then ends with calmness and a masterpiece. Beautiful and timely for this time of the year.
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It is good to be poet, but the pay is still shitty--Bobby Bird. I don't know if you were working off a word list, but the piece sparkles & dazzles. It shut be linked into dVerse, brother. I like your lines /I opened my eyes to my painted thoughts/I start afresh/.
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