Poem: Kindling Dream


Quote of the day:
I dreamed I was a butterfly, flitting around in the sky; then I awoke. Now I wonder: Am I a man who dreamt of being a butterfly, or am I a butterfly dreaming that I am a man? -Zhuangzi

image: DeviantArt/Kev-kills


I gasped as the cold winds brushed.
Against my face.
Like a painter's stroke.
On a blank canvass.

I watched leaves detach from trees.
Like thieves escaping from crime scenes.

I hear violin strings or maybe a mandolin?
I can picture the fiddlers playing with ease.

Like A.B.C.'s deep inside a symphony...
...Orchestra, two acts conjoined like Siamese.
I'm fulfilled with their striking expertise.
Its like crossing the seven seas.

I close my eyes and take it all in.
I transport back to the present.
I circumvent my emotions.
Contentment and resentment.

Calmness prevails. No more winds.
I opened my eyes to my painted thoughts.
I start afresh, I've given myself a new lease.
A blank canvas replaced with a masterpiece.



Peace. Love. Serenity*

Current Listen: Dave Brubeck -Take Five


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54 Comments

  1. this is wonderful my friend.

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  2. @Denise: Hello lovely, thank you and its nice to see you here!

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  3. Que bela postagem amei
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  4. What one can create if they just let go and do

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  5. If you can visualize it, you can create it.

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  6. Hmmn...that quote!
    How you been?

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  7. Striking imagery. I love how after the artistic storm the poet awakens to their masterpiece complete. You are a talented poet for sure!

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  8. Nice transformation in this. Surreal enough to feel like dreaming and waking, to a new life - to a new lease.

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  9. Today, you're thinking kindling dream and I'm thinking kindling wood. Gettin' chilly here.

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  10. Always good to 'pause' throughout our day and reflect, revitalize and continue with our day.
    Liked your verse, Blogoratti. Thanks for sharing.

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  11. What a lovely poem. Starts out with the cold then ends with calmness and a masterpiece. Beautiful and timely for this time of the year.

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  12. This is a thought provoking poem... I love those kind ... :)

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  13. A really great and enjoyable poem!

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  14. Oh I love the quote. That's very deep.

    Have a terrific day. ☺

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  15. Lovely...

    And love the art. Deviant Art has amazing things...

    Tessa

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  16. I love your blog. I just love it. I love this quote and poem. I just love your blog.

    Bless you

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    @Birdman: Ha, do try to keep warm as it is indeed getting chilly. Many thanks!

    @Jim: Great thoughts indeed. Thanks for your visit and kind comment!

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    @Launna: Hello, its so nice to see you again. Many thanks indeed!

    @eViL pOp TaRt: Its nice to know you enjoyed it, thank you!

    @Sandee: I'm glad you like, and do enjoy the rest of the week, kind of you to drop by!

    @Tessa~ Here there be musing: Greetings to you, and thank you for dropping by again. Yes, its got amazing things indeed!

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    @Jackie Harrison: I appreciate that, many thanks!

    @A. George: You flatter me with words. Thank you, thank you. Peace and love always!

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  18. @Terri @ Coloring Outside the Lines: Greetings to you, and so nice of you to visit and comment!

    @Nequéren Reis: Its kind of you to visit, thank you!

    @Pat Hatt: I agree, good thoughts. Many thanks!

    @Alex J. Cavanaugh: Wise words indeed...and thanks for stopping by!

    @Tamie: Greetings, and good to see you here. I've been great thanks and do have a lovely week!

    @Couture Carrie: Hello lovely, thank you so much!

    @My name is Erika.: Oh you flatter me with words. Thank you so much and very kind of you to visit!

    @Kindlemom: Hello and its nice of you to drop by, thank you!

    @X: Thank you, appreciate your insight and visit!

    @Birdman: Ha, do try to keep warm as it is indeed getting chilly. Many thanks!

    @Jim: Great thoughts indeed. Thanks for your visit and kind comment!

    @tina: Greetings to you. I appreciate your visit and comment, thank you!

    @Launna: Hello, its so nice to see you again. Many thanks indeed!

    @eViL pOp TaRt: Its nice to know you enjoyed it, thank you!

    @Sandee: I'm glad you like, and do enjoy the rest of the week, kind of you to drop by!

    @Tessa~ Here there be musing: Greetings to you, and thank you for dropping by again. Yes, its got amazing things indeed!

    @Gail: Hello, so great of you to drop by, thanks a lot!

    @Jackie Harrison: I appreciate that, many thanks!

    @A. George: You flatter me with words. Thank you, thank you. Peace and love always!

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  20. This is lovely and amazing.
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  21. It is good to be poet, but the pay is still shitty--Bobby Bird. I don't know if you were working off a word list, but the piece sparkles & dazzles. It shut be linked into dVerse, brother. I like your lines /I opened my eyes to my painted thoughts/I start afresh/.

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  22. this blank canvas
    taunts imaginations
    memory's paint

    __As read, it then came through a different brush, this instant's senryu.
    Inspiring and grand, your verse here Blogoratti_!
    _m

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  23. Wonderful opening lines especially









    ALOHA
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  24. Such a captivating poem!
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  25. Nice work. Very powerful imagery.

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  26. I like the poeam and the quote at the beginning :) It would be good to make a masterpiece of our lives ;)

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  27. I like the poeam and the quote at the beginning :) It would be good to make a masterpiece of our lives ;)

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  28. The quote is a food for thought....




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  30. I always enjoy your poems. More power to you quill!

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  31. Oh, this is so beautiful and mysterious.

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  32. Thanks dear :)
    Great poem ;)
    Have a nice day!

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  33. Amazing

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  34. I've written about two poems in my life. Yours are much better.

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  35. I really love the quote...and your poem is so, so beautiful!
    Really touched my heart...:)

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  36. This is too good to read just once... I'm up to three already. Brilliant piece of work.

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  37. Great picture your words have painted.

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  39. You gave me the courage to post mine. fingers crossed for tomorrow. xxxxx.

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  40. Outstanding images, enjoyed the read. Very much.

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