Monday, April 27, 2009

Forget Me Not



Quote of the day:
The question is not what you look at, but what you see -Henry David 



Many things have happened 
water passed under this living bridge

there's a seige on our emotions
everything that i wanted i let go

memories are leaves
and i walk on them daily 

i remember you
i remember your eyes
the twinkle in them and those smiles....

i remember us 
i remember our dreams
the beauty of it intoxicating...

i remember life...

future looked so far away...
now it's just another day 

i remember you...

violin strings of melody
you and i Siamese twins-what a tragedy


Current Listen: Avril Lavigne -Forgotten


14 comments:

  1. nice poem. kind of sad though..

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  2. Now this made ME remember stuff, i didn't feel like remembering!

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  3. What RocNaija said.
    Good stuff as usual.
    In lieu of the post, check out Taylor Swift's Breathe. happy monday.

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  4. "cut me real deep"
    nicely written...

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  5. Blog, was the post for me? *wink wink*

    This was a beautifl post and like Roc said, brought back some memories or lack of it.

    I love the quote too; what do you see? are we seeing same thing or....

    and you had to crown it with my girl avril

    niiiice

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  6. a blank verse with nolstagic feelings. Short and embedded with deep messages. beautiful and well constructed poem.

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  7. talent, talent again i say, nice work!!!

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  8. sometimes it hurts to go down memory lane. i promised i was not going to look back again, but reading this, it kinda feels good to remember some good things. u really write well i must say

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  9. Melancolic, but good as always.

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  10. @BSNC,sad uhn?...yeah it is come to tihnk of it*

    @Roc,Memory lane uhn. I feel you..

    @TayneMent,thanks for the heads up,would be checking that out*

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  11. @chayoma,awww hope the cut wasn't too deep,hehe. I know what you mean though,reading it over again after posting. Thanks for dropping by*

    @naijagirl,lol@ *wink wink*.
    So what memories flooded back to you,hhnnnnm?
    And as per that quote: we see the same things,one way or the other,hehe!

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  12. my darlin B , i ve missed you....but i will be back soonish to catch up on old ones i promise...but u r words are as poignant as ever...beautifully done!!
    p.s u berra have missed me too....yes the only acceptable answer is " why wldn't I"...lol

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  13. @mike,thank you-far too kind*

    @OPTIMISTIC_alyzzz,glad you approve,nice of you to drop by

    @Naked soul,yea sometimes it feels good to remember,thanks for the warm words..

    @Adaeze,hi there-thank you,glad you like*

    @CC,why wouldn't i...lol. Miss you like a fat kid misses cake*
    I see you, and no i'm not complaining,even though you've been MIA...i know you'll be back*

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  14. This makes me incredibly sad, especially: "Memories are leaves and I walk on them daily". Beautiful poem X

    THEFASHION-JUNKIE

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