ENVY

Blogoratti May 13, 2009
Quote of the day:
I shut my eyes in order to see -Paul Gauguin


ENVY.

All Some
of what
you had
i wanted
so bad

I wanted needed
it all
to be
mine

your
mission vision
reputation fame
dreams,
and thoughts

everything,
that you
had
I secretly admired envied.






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Love the smell of rain, white clouds turning gray. Have a thing for poetry, music,art and design.. I take each day as it comes. let me take you on this journey. It's your ideas that matter. For collaborations: blogoratti@gmail.com

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17 Comments

  1. Anonymous13 May 2009 at 18:18

    Hmm very nice..
    but come to think of it, this your kind of envy is quite 'good'. I'd love to look at it as a.d.m.i.r.a.t.i.o.n!!!
    I 'envy' your skills. LOL
    Trust your week is going fine.
    :)

    Am I first? :D

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  2. Adaeze13 May 2009 at 20:13

    wow. Original and fierce.

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  3. Anonymous13 May 2009 at 20:15

    Envy! it really sucks sometimes.

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  4. Danny BaGucci13 May 2009 at 21:04

    Totally nailed the subject of envy bruv.......cool..

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  5. Miss Natural13 May 2009 at 21:43

    This poem is so ingenious that I cant even begin to explain. Well done x

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  6. Chomy13 May 2009 at 21:51

    hahahahhahahaaha i knew u envied me B...thanks for confessing...now the world knows it!! LOL.

    this is fantastic.

    envy is jealousy on speed, it will consume you if u don't get to the bottom of it and curb it. We envy things we can't have but if you take time to get to the very bottom of that intense intense desire, u may just find out thaat u don't necessary need to be that which u envy to matter....moreover envy takes way less effort and takes up too much time...u can envy something all u want, AND still never get it. know thyself, know thy restrictions, envying something u will NEVER have ages you, also heard it pushes out gray hair and "worry" brow. Admiration takes way less effort anyway....ppl need to try tht instead.

    u brings it everytime B!!! EVERTIME!!!

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  7. *Diane*13 May 2009 at 21:51

    Nicely done Mr. Blogoratti!!

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  8. AliceDCL13 May 2009 at 22:14

    i am jealous of u oh,
    JEALOUS NOT ENVIOUS LOL.
    NICE POEM

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  9. Anonymous14 May 2009 at 01:30

    niiice. envy....the root of most evil.
    I see, I want, I covet....whatever Laura wants, Laura gets

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  10. Blogoratti14 May 2009 at 08:38

    @Ochuko,truth about life? We are envious of one another,admiration often times leads to that..
    lol@ i 'envy' your skills. Okay there's good and bad envy then.
    And yes you are first.Thanks man!

    @Adaeze,hi. Appreciate that!

    @Tay-mee, it does doesn't it?

    @Danny BaGucci, thanks you far too kind bro*

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  11. Blogoratti14 May 2009 at 09:47

    @CC,well now you and the whole world knows that,hehe!
    Glad you approve and envy is really jealousy on speed,thanks for sharing your thoughts on envy Vs admiration-and yes i thing people need to start going for the latter..You've said it all-once again.
    You bet i bring it everytime,lol* Thanks CC.

    @*Diane*,thank you for that diane.Much Luv!

    @OPTIMISTIC_alyzzz, Jealous not envious...hnnnm? lol.

    @naijagirl,whatever laura wants she gets uhn,lol.

    thanks people*

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  12. scribble,me.free14 May 2009 at 10:03

    dude...teach me!

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  13. Blogoratti14 May 2009 at 15:21

    @scribble,me.free,you are cracking me up you know...i watched the '40 year old virgin' some days back-and those were the exact words said in one of the scenes,lol.

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  14. Anonymous14 May 2009 at 15:40

    Excellent stuff.
    Deep.
    Real.
    Sincere.
    Emotive.

    Thanks and I like your quotes.

    God bless you.

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  15. Miss Natural14 May 2009 at 15:40

    hmm so I had another read. essentially you were saying the same thing. I really like your writing style...and look forward to reading more of ur poetry.

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  16. Blogoratti14 May 2009 at 17:27

    @babajidesalu, glad you found it all to be so-and much more. Thanks a lot,nice seeing you on here*

    @Miss Natural,you flatter me with words, what more can i say but thank you, appreciate that*

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  17. LISA VAZQUEZ14 May 2009 at 18:47

    Yes... fierce piece... I agree with Adaeze!!

    Peace, blessings and godliness,
    Lisa

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