POETICA I

Blogoratti June 30, 2009

Quote of the day:

Love is but the discovery of ourselves in others, and the delight in the recognition. -Alexander Smith




I am
Asleep...

But my mind
Is awake to you.

If i weep.
It's my heart trying to reach for you.

As i live..
My heart is in tune with you.

If you leave..
I'd be lost...
Lost without you.



Current Listen: Jamelia -Something About You


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Blogoratti

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22 Comments

  1. Elusivebabe30 June 2009 at 23:21

    Love it. Especially the "I am Asleep...But my mind Is awake to you." bit.

    In your shadowy half pic you look a lot like a guy I know...lol.

    Hope you are okay =)

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  2. Anonymous30 June 2009 at 23:53

    i absolutely love it. love it.

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  3. Repressed One1 July 2009 at 01:28

    Me likey!!! Nice!

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  4. Anonymous1 July 2009 at 02:55

    ...loves it!

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  5. Anonymous1 July 2009 at 04:34

    if you die....i would hit my head on the wall and keep wailing.

    nice poem


    i like the quote...i just wished it was true

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  6. Rene1 July 2009 at 04:37

    love the quote.
    As i live..
    My heart is in tune with you.
    love

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  7. Anonymous1 July 2009 at 05:15

    see y i dont like love?i dont want to discover myself in another person i love my self now.

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  8. Blogoratti1 July 2009 at 11:59

    @Elusivebabe,glad you love it.
    In my shadowy half pic uhn...lol.
    Speaking of guys..is it a guy you know or used to know. I'm just saying :-)

    I'm okay, how you?

    @kmplx,why thank you,glad you like.

    @Repressed One,appreciate that.

    @Brokeass,how are ya? Thanks for dropping by.

    @NG,lol. I see you...

    @Rene,really? Thank you for that.

    @leggy,haha you are real funny.

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  9. Tigeress1 July 2009 at 18:46

    aaaaawww.....sounds like mad luv!!

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  10. Miss Natural1 July 2009 at 19:32

    you're lost without her :( very emotional and deep. You're such a brilliant writer sha

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  11. Blogoratti1 July 2009 at 20:02

    @Tigeress,awwww thanks!

    @Miss Natural,hey appreciate that.

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  12. *Diane*1 July 2009 at 21:40

    Very sweet! and i like the pic too..

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  13. =♥...IamShhh...♥=1 July 2009 at 21:42

    I love the quote by Mr Smith!

    "As i live..
    My heart is in tune with you."

    if only most guys could return the favour & sincerely feel thaT way!!

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  14. Blogoratti1 July 2009 at 22:52

    @*Diane*,really...thanks for that.

    @=♥...IamShhh...♥=,you sure they don't?:-)

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  15. =♥...IamShhh...♥=2 July 2009 at 01:19

    yup!!!!!! pay attention to the word *most*

    you know that I know that I have a point! guys just don't feel that way anymore! - well last time I checked!

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  16. Blogoratti2 July 2009 at 11:48

    @=♥...IamShhh...♥=,lol@ last time i checked...and when was the last time?

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  17. =♥...IamShhh...♥=2 July 2009 at 21:35

    LOL! recently actually :)

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  18. Blogoratti2 July 2009 at 22:06

    @=♥...IamShhh...♥=,recently uhn...Ouch! lol.

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  19. Adaeze3 July 2009 at 09:01

    I love the " I am asleep, but my mind is awake to you" aww..How sweet.

    I am back. Sorry been away for awhile.

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  20. Blogoratti3 July 2009 at 11:39

    @Adaeze,hey welcome back...missed you on here and thanks for lookin' out.

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  21. Elusivebabe6 July 2009 at 12:11

    A guy I know..lol.
    I'm good thx...enjoying the hot weather before it goes all bi-polar on us.

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  22. Blogoratti6 July 2009 at 14:19

    @Elusivebabe,alrite i hear ya...i see you having fun-enjoy it while it lasts like you rightly said.

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