Red Becomes Blue

Blogoratti October 09, 2009


Quote of the day:
The cure for boredom is curiosity. There is no cure for curiosity.
-Dorothy Parker



I am running.
Backwards in time.

Tick tock of the clock is distant.
I am resistant to you.

Life is a twist.
A waterless pool.

I'm ashamed to ask...
But don't you feel my gravitional pull?

You sparkle like a jewel in the sun.
Fist in the air, a radical son.
Far-reaching are my ways.
I disect my way through days.

Days
Feel like minutes..we run when we can walk.
We keep silent...when we should talk.
Deny things that are true. Red becomes blue...

Pay up my one tenth.
You are 99th on my list of problems.
Maybe someday you'd be first.

Maybe when red becomes blue.


Current Listen: Three Days Grace- Lost In You


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Blogoratti

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Love the smell of rain, white clouds turning gray. Have a thing for poetry, music,art and design.. I take each day as it comes. let me take you on this journey. It's your ideas that matter. For collaborations: blogoratti@gmail.com

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15 Comments

  1. Anonymous9 October 2009 at 16:33

    lol.niceeeeee

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  2. Myne9 October 2009 at 17:07

    There is a message embedded in this poem and you carefully wrap it up. Reminds me of the movie, the invention of lying. Good stuff.

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  3. Blogoratti9 October 2009 at 17:22

    leggy: Hi ya..glad you like.

    MW: Thanks for stopping by, and yes there's a mesasge there :)

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  4. TayneMent9 October 2009 at 17:42

    So let me see, I have two options as to what you were speaking of. let me know if I am wrong or right.

    Either it's unrequited love or two people who happen to just not be on the same page and are not addressing the issue.

    Have a lovely weekend "Ratti.

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  5. Apinke9 October 2009 at 18:14

    Days
    Feel like minutes..we run when we can walk.
    We keep silent...when we should talk.
    Deny things that are true. Red becomes blue...

    this is deep..... you are deep..... love it.

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  6. Miss Natural9 October 2009 at 18:33

    I love the poem although the last two lines remind me of a personal friends for benefit situation lol. Sorry ive been awol. isp's are screwing with me

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  7. Fabulo-la9 October 2009 at 19:57

    uh?
    What what what?
    That ish just struck a chord.
    Who is the subject of the poem B'ratti?

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  8. Sugarking9 October 2009 at 20:02

    Loving the rhymes here. I could lace u with some beats man. Lemme know. Nice one.

    u could look me up on www.myspace.com/sugakingg

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  9. Nice Anon9 October 2009 at 23:42

    TayneMent: I am with you on that.

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  10. Chiamaka10 October 2009 at 21:13

    99 of all your problems? after all those sweet words

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  11. V10 October 2009 at 23:42

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    x

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  12. SOLOMONSYDELLE12 October 2009 at 17:54

    oooh, when red becomes blue...
    ouch.

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  13. Blogoratti13 October 2009 at 11:25

    Hey guys..

    TM| Uhm you are right anfd wrong :) How you?

    Omotee!|glad you love :)

    HYAW|lol

    Miss Natural | feel you on that. Arghh ISPs..

    Fab| Struck a chord uhn...the subject? Hit me up on twitter,wink*

    Sugarking| Sup bro,good lookin' out.

    V| Thanks for stopping by always. Will be sure to check that link of yours.

    SOLOMONSYDELLE| Ouch indeed,many thanks.

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  14. bob-ij13 October 2009 at 11:27

    meaning. never yeah! As always... very impressed!!
    x!

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  15. Blogoratti13 October 2009 at 11:28

    bob-ij| Hey you ;). You good?

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