Friday, August 07, 2009

Textual description of firstImageUrl

070809

Quote of the day:
Never refuse any advance of friendship, for if nine out of ten bring you nothing, one alone may repay you.
-Madame de Tencin





She walks beauty...
And then the moon saw her.

Whispered to the sun from afar.
Model like and still angelic...

Even the wind remained static.
Never erratic
.

The way she walked...
Caused tremors in the earth.
Earthquake?


And my heart spluterred like a car out of gas..
My heart was beating fast..

And then she looked at ME at last...
I melted like ice.

That was my sacrifice...

You see your body was the violin..
your heartbeat was the drums...

Your thoughts playing like guitar strings..
A symphony of quick releases.
Entwined like conjoined twins..
A harmony of oblique mixes.

I sensed you.
I felt you.
I played you.



Current Listen: Three Days Grace -Get Out Alive



-

21 comments:

  1. This is Simply Beautiful...

    ReplyDelete
  2. I am usually poetically challenged, but I liked this.

    Nice!

    BTW, thanks for stopping by my ...Easier...site. Much appreciated!


    NIGERIAN CURIOSITY
    IT WAS SO MUCH EASIER WHEN I ONLY HAD ONE...

    ReplyDelete
  3. @Rose,really? Aww,glad you approve.

    @SOLOMONSYDELLE,appreciate your stopping by,thank you.

    ReplyDelete
  4. Awwww. I LOVE both the poem and the quote. The Poem especially! Good stuff!

    ReplyDelete
  5. @Ms. Dufa,awww nice lookin' out..many thanks!!

    ReplyDelete
  6. loved it.have a nice weekend :)

    ReplyDelete
  7. Blogoratti eh.. all these love and poetry you dey spit up and down.. Hope you are very fine to back it up oo! Kai!

    LOL just messing with you.. how body?

    ReplyDelete
  8. @The Girl with the Red Hair,Hi there-good of you to drop by!

    @Nice Anon,haha! I see you taking wild shots-ain't nuffn' wrong in that. But....nah m kiddn:)
    Have a nice weekend,yea.

    ReplyDelete
  9. I sensed u
    I felt you
    I played you

    ah Oluwa mi o
    All these lyrically seducing men you have blessed the earth with???
    Y did I not meet one of them eh biko?
    SO B'ratti pray do tell..are you single???


    lol

    ReplyDelete
  10. i like the simplicity of it. For me, poetry is the simpler the better.

    ReplyDelete
  11. @Fabulo-la,lyrically seducing men has got a nice ring to it :)
    As to your other question,ahem let's dicuss in private,hehe!

    @Have you any wool,simplicity yes!! Especially for folks that tend not to like poetry...but they might have a change of heart if it's simple enough to comprehend,yea.

    ReplyDelete
  12. Scarlet loves this!!!
    my favourite part was the last three lines. Beauuutiful!

    ReplyDelete
  13. Mehn, if only i have that effect on someone,
    who knows maybe i do! lol

    Beautiful
    As always

    ReplyDelete
  14. that was wonderful. just felt like you wrote it for me...lol

    well a girl can only hope :)

    ReplyDelete
  15. BSNC abeg go sit down...everyone knos he wrote it for me.looool
    good stuff blogoratti!

    E-service coming soon to blogsville, check out my blog and spread the word!

    ReplyDelete
  16. @Scarlet,i'm glad scarlet lovees this:) Thanks for visiting!

    @chayoma,who says you don't,wink*

    @BSNC,why i wrote it for you, and ...

    @Gee,and you too,lol. Good lookin' out. Wld check out that stuff you mentioned.

    Cheers everyone!

    ReplyDelete
  17. Lovely.... :-)))

    Written out your plans for the week yet? I look forward to reading them.. always a constant reminder to make sure I've written mine.. lol.

    Have an awesome week of supernatural speed :-)

    ReplyDelete
  18. aww that was breath-taking!

    ReplyDelete
  19. @Remi: Hey thanks for stopping by,appreciate that.

    @brie: Really? Many thanks!

    ReplyDelete

Thanks for visiting and commenting.

Do connect with me on my other platforms below.

e: blogoratti@gmail.com
twitter: Iamblogoratti
Instagram: Iamblogoratti