Chasing Goodbyes

Blogoratti September 28, 2009



Quote of the day:
We shall find peace. We shall hear the angels, we shall see the sky sparkling with diamonds.
-Anton Chekhov



I was am
A dreamer
But
I'm not
The only one.


I am was your enemy
Lurking around
Your heart
Now we dream together.

I
Didn't want
to see you go leave
So i left stayed without
Saying hello goodbye.
Blogoratti

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9 Comments

  1. Myne28 September 2009 at 19:14

    Your poems always have something going on, so what's with the canceled out words?

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  2. TayneMent28 September 2009 at 19:41

    Lol you can just tell by your poems that you are a private person.

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  3. Trybes29 September 2009 at 04:17

    Bellied with meanings for a discernin mind.Good sturv bro!

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  4. Fabulo-la29 September 2009 at 04:44

    Im still trying to figure out how you use such simple words to belly such heavy meanings...?

    i have to study ur poems one of these days....

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  5. Anoda Phase29 September 2009 at 12:27

    I agree with Fabulo-la...

    how r u doing?

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  6. Blogoratti29 September 2009 at 12:58

    MW: What's with the cancelled out words? Ehm...

    TM: You can can't you :)

    Fab: Hi ya. Appreciate that.

    Trybes:Good lookin' out,yea!

    Anoda Phase: Hey maany thanks for droppign by. I'm doing great actually,hope you are too?

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  7. The Girl with the Red Hair29 September 2009 at 14:15

    Your poems comes with a difference, I really need to take time to get the underlying messages.

    Please whats with the cancellations

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  8. Blogoratti29 September 2009 at 14:35

    The Girl with the Red Hair: Whats with the cancellations?
    Myne Whitman asked that too..

    There's an underlying meaning to those canceled words...they can be disregarded or vice versa.

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  9. Rene29 September 2009 at 15:49

    I agree wit fabulo-la...ur poems sometimes need serious studying.

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