Monday, September 28, 2009

Chasing Goodbyes




Quote of the day:

We shall find peace. We shall hear the angels, we shall see the sky sparkling with diamonds.
-Anton Chekhov



I was am
A dreamer
But
I'm not
The only one.


I am was your enemy
Lurking around
Your heart
Now we dream together.

I
Didn't want
to see you go leave
So i left stayed without
Saying hello goodbye.

9 comments:

  1. Your poems always have something going on, so what's with the canceled out words?

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  2. Lol you can just tell by your poems that you are a private person.

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  3. Bellied with meanings for a discernin mind.Good sturv bro!

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  4. Im still trying to figure out how you use such simple words to belly such heavy meanings...?

    i have to study ur poems one of these days....

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  5. I agree with Fabulo-la...

    how r u doing?

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  6. MW: What's with the cancelled out words? Ehm...

    TM: You can can't you :)

    Fab: Hi ya. Appreciate that.

    Trybes:Good lookin' out,yea!

    Anoda Phase: Hey maany thanks for droppign by. I'm doing great actually,hope you are too?

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  7. Your poems comes with a difference, I really need to take time to get the underlying messages.

    Please whats with the cancellations

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  8. The Girl with the Red Hair: Whats with the cancellations?
    Myne Whitman asked that too..

    There's an underlying meaning to those canceled words...they can be disregarded or vice versa.

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  9. I agree wit fabulo-la...ur poems sometimes need serious studying.

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