It all starts when we take the first step;; everything in life starts with just the first step..
When does the pain endWhy does this peom have to end.Love this...
@Tricia: I know right!@Lara: Thanks :)
it doesn't end...iLike..
@aeedeeaee: Glad you do!
blogoratti, nice one!
When does pain endWhen does the pleasure startWhat will I do If it doesnt endWill I just settle then for pleasurable painI like your poems
love the quote as per always and nice poem...have a great rest of the week
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Sometimes the answers lie inbetween the beginning and the end. I like the quote.It's never right to be wrong.
it never ends
This is beautiful. I actually let out a *gasp!*
Beautiful poem! I'd say throw out the Time element i.e when and understand why! I love the last line.Lovely way to end it!~x~
Sometimes it's right to be wrong and vice versa. Who's to decide what's right and what's wrong?
erm... again I ask, how do u do it?
@Jaycee: Hello..thanks for that.@Rene: I know right..@Pea: Gasp* :)@bob-ij: Hi dimps*! Okay that's duly noted,wink*@48: Yeah who's to decide...i wonder.@lani: Hehe...how you doing bro.Much Luv guys!
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It all starts when we take the first step;; everything in life starts with just the first step..
ReplyDeleteWhen does the pain end
ReplyDeleteWhy does this peom have to end.
Love this...
@Tricia: I know right!
ReplyDelete@Lara: Thanks :)
it doesn't end...
ReplyDeleteiLike..
@aeedeeaee: Glad you do!
ReplyDeleteblogoratti, nice one!
ReplyDeleteWhen does pain end
ReplyDeleteWhen does the pleasure start
What will I do If it doesnt end
Will I just settle then for pleasurable pain
I like your poems
love the quote as per always and nice poem...have a great rest of the week
ReplyDelete@NakedSha: Why thank you miss.
ReplyDelete@Nutty J: Thank you...far too kind :)
@neefemi: Nice seeing you on here nee..thank you and have a nice week!
Sometimes the answers lie inbetween the beginning and the end. I like the quote.
ReplyDeleteIt's never right to be wrong.
it never ends
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful. I actually let out a *gasp!*
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem! I'd say throw out the Time element i.e when and understand why!
ReplyDeleteI love the last line.
Lovely way to end it!
~x~
Sometimes it's right to be wrong and vice versa. Who's to decide what's right and what's wrong?
ReplyDeleteerm... again I ask, how do u do it?
ReplyDelete@Jaycee: Hello..thanks for that.
ReplyDelete@Rene: I know right..
@Pea: Gasp* :)
@bob-ij: Hi dimps*! Okay that's duly noted,wink*
@48: Yeah who's to decide...i wonder.
@lani: Hehe...how you doing bro.
Much Luv guys!
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