Unopened Letter

Blogoratti June 19, 2010


Quote of the day:
If I am a legend, then why am I so lonely?
-Judy Garland


Like the early morning sun dear.
You crept up on me and showered me with warmth.

Away from all the coldness around here.
I seem lost in your eternal embrace.

You took away most of my innermost fears.
You wiped away my tears when no one else was looking.

Life is a puzzle, let our love form the missing pieces.
Let our togetherness change with the seasons.

It is said that there's nothing new under the sun.
Funny..cause i set my eyes on you right underneath it.

Better believe it when i tell you that i have flaws.
But even a beautiful rose has thorns-but yet we overlook it.

I can climb mountains just to hear your voice.
But a phone call is faster...but yet i hold back by choice.

Define life and define love.
I know what i want but sometimes is that enough?

When my thoughts fade...erase.
It's only memories of you that shall remain.


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18 Comments

  1. Omosi Thisgirl19 June 2010 at 19:21

    Dude I am not big on poetry but your poems make me want to read more poetry, they're that good.

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  2. Tatababe19 June 2010 at 19:22

    Hmmnn....I like. Interesting question u have though "I know what i want but sometimes is that enough?"
    I say nope! u've gotta go out and get it!

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  3. Amara19 June 2010 at 19:37

    iLike! but why do we hold back? These words are strangely familiar...Love is an informed decision to be with you despite the flaws and imperfections because we realise our one is better than us two. But sometimes I think we must move in faith. Definition of life? Hmm too much for me

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  4. Myne19 June 2010 at 20:52

    Life is a puzzle, let our love form the missing pieces.
    Let our togetherness change with the seasons.

    It is said that there's nothing new under the sun.
    Funny..cause i set my eyes on you right underneath it.

    ********************

    Those are fav lines, and I can almost swear I've never come across those before too. Nice...

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  5. Blogoratti19 June 2010 at 20:57

    @Omosi T: Touched by that omosi...many thanks*

    @Tatababe: Go get it...true that. Nice of you to stop by.

    @Amara: Feel you on that...and much more. Nice seeing you on here,thanks.

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  6. Blogoratti19 June 2010 at 21:02

    @Myne Whitman: That you like...brings a smile to my face M.W :)appreciate that a lot.

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  7. AliceDCL19 June 2010 at 21:16

    why do love poems make me sad now
    *sigh*

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  8. Jennifer A.20 June 2010 at 00:56

    Blogoratti, why is the end sad? *Pouting*

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  9. Jennifer A.20 June 2010 at 00:57

    I know what it is...I believe all good imaginations must have a romantic end. But many times, we only live in our dreams. *Sigh* pls I want a happy ending to the next poem.

    ps: I love your poems.

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  10. Nee Fe Mi20 June 2010 at 01:25

    "Life is a puzzle, let our love form the missing pieces.
    Let our togetherness change with the seasons."

    awwwwwwwww i'm like Amen and praying that for myself

    "A phone call is faster...but yet i hold back by choice."

    i do the same and i wonder why

    you write well....

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  11. Nutty J.20 June 2010 at 13:20

    This is lovely...

    Love poems nowadays makes me feel sad too.

    I like this poem

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  12. Ms.O20 June 2010 at 14:02

    Oh wow...I love it!

    p.s #NF you on twitter.

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  13. Mwajim Al20 June 2010 at 15:51

    "I know what I want but sometimes is that enough?" The million dollar question... If love is so beautiful and fulfilling, then why are we so afraid of expressing it? of showing something so wholesome? Scary... and a bummer... Yet, I like to go with the policy of taking that leap of faith... and trusting it leads to our own good.

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  14. Kafo20 June 2010 at 17:04

    wow
    i love this

    especially
    Define life and define love.
    I know what i want but sometimes is that enough?


    still thinking this through

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  15. Blogoratti20 June 2010 at 18:23

    @BBB: They make you sad uhn :)

    @Jaycee: More happy endings uhn? Done -:) And hey glad you like...

    @neefemi: Aw thank you miss...far too kind.

    @Nutty J.: Sad? You too...aw! Nice of you to stop by*

    @Ms.O: Many thanks...will #nf you back on twitter,wink*

    @Mwajim Al: Nice..taking that leap of faith sometimes works out i guess. Nice seeing you on here.

    @Kafo: Yeah deep stuff to think true i know right* Appreciate your comment.

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  16. Ali.geezy21 June 2010 at 01:04

    Awww I love your poem, in fact, I enjoy all of your poems.
    (:

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  17. Unknown24 June 2010 at 13:34

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  18. Unknown24 June 2010 at 13:36

    i like...

    take the pressure off and just be comfortable being you so you keep writing for our reading enjoyment.

    Vivid! very.
    Guess what i am such a hopeless romantic, i deleted the last two or three lines from my head

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