Quote of the day:
Ingenuity, plus courage, plus work, equals miracles -Bob Richards
Teary Eyed Skies!
My arms are too short to box with God...
i thought...
my arms were too short so i ....
I punched the skies instead...
and that left the clouds shedding tears.....literally.
i had won.
23 Comments
Aww, I like the strength that this piece exudes. A quiet, trying masculinity. I love that.
ReplyDeleteL.
@L-VII, oooh glad you like it!!
ReplyDeleteHappy easter*
Succinct as always..
ReplyDeleteNice one bro!
@Roc, thanks brov*
ReplyDeleteAppreciate that,yeah!
Nice one..
ReplyDeleteI dey fear literally??? lol :(
ReplyDelete@BSNC,nice looking you*
ReplyDelete@LovePaprika, Have no fear,-literally,lol.
Short and beautifully written...
ReplyDeleteAAAHHHHH.. you've blown me away!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteTHIS IS THE HOTTEST POEM I'VE HEARD THIS YEAR!!!!!!!!!!!!
HAWT....
Let the Climate change guys buy this off you and you can make a fortune out of it....
I BOW!!!!
NICEEEEEEEEE
I Agree with the earlier comments...
ReplyDeleteNice
@My World,thank you, far too kind*
ReplyDelete@ochuko,sigh* wish that fortune would come already,lol*
Oh my, i'm thankful,for the words and support..appreciate it all*
@Dabizniz,nice seeing you on here!
*thanks
Nice work dear ;)
ReplyDeletelol @ both you and Ochuko
ReplyDeletenice one
happy easter
Sometimes I feel that way...Like I want to fight with God...but I can't...There's no way I can...So I fight what I can...Don't know if that's what you were trying to say but that's what I got from it.
ReplyDeleteBrilliant as always.
Have a blessed weekend! x
Wowieee....strong stuff!
ReplyDeleteDo you do spoken word poetry? for some weird reason I even pictured you performing this and felt the impact of the words, not to talk less of the rest of the poem. nice one~
@Cappuccine Baby, thank you,far too kind*
ReplyDelete@naijagirl,yeah lol*
Happy Easter to you NG!
@Lolia,very impressive*
You absolutely got the message...Nice!
@*Abeni*,uhhnm i've never tried the spoken word form of poetry, but i see what you mean*
lol@..'for some weird reason'..
Thanks. Much Luv *
Very strong poem. I like that the poor clouds cried. I don't know why this reminded me of John Milton's poem "On his blindness" I guess is the God vs human interaction.
ReplyDeleteHappy Easter!
x!
@bob-ij,i just checked out that "on his blindness" poem -truly great poem by John Milton. Nice!
ReplyDeleteThanks for that*
wow..bravo..
ReplyDeletewith regards to the quote..does that mean miracles dont actually happen?
Ah I have to agree that's so hot! Feisty. Love it.
ReplyDelete@Butter, uhnnnm with regards to the quote i think miracles do happen..lol
ReplyDelete@Adaeze,hello and welcome back.
Thanks for stopping by*
I love the simplicity in this, powerful I think, but I like to be deep like that :P
ReplyDelete@FF,simplicity does it for me too,wink wink*
ReplyDeleteGlad you like it!
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