Pendant Round Your Neck

Blogoratti February 18, 2010


Quote of the day:
He who speaks without modesty will find it difficult to make his words good.
-Confucius


I walked along the gloomy streets.
I stopped and saw you in the distance.

A silhouette against the receding cloud.
A duet of unspoken emotions aloud.

It's a game.
It's roulette.

Red or black?
Even or Odd?

At times we have to die literally.
To experience a rebirth.

It was an intimate moment.
You and I.

I felt it.

The pendant around your neck.
That elegance in your stride.
And lots more that i eyed.

I swam across a waveless sea.
Drowned in a waterless lake.
It was a conflict to stay awake.

Forgive my penchant.
For that pendant around your neck.


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21 Comments

  1. P.T18 February 2010 at 17:11

    Lucky girl with the pendant! :)

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  2. Nee Fe Mi18 February 2010 at 18:26

    awwww how sweet....very lucky girl...

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  3. Blogoratti18 February 2010 at 18:56

    @P.T: Hehe,hi ya.

    @neefemi:Thanks.

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  4. Unknown18 February 2010 at 19:39

    wow!.. I'm jealous.. lol..
    www.askchacha4free.blogspot.com

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  5. Myne18 February 2010 at 19:43

    This is too cute. Nice, melikey...

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  6. Blessing19 February 2010 at 05:01

    Nice poem...lucky girl indeed!

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  7. Harry19 February 2010 at 10:06

    Dude...u have a way with words...

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  8. Blogoratti19 February 2010 at 11:23

    @2cute4u: Don't be :)

    @MW: Aw thanks for liking..

    @Blowing Blessings Your Way: Appreciate your stopping by.

    @Harry-Rami Itie: Thanks bro.

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  9. Anonymous19 February 2010 at 13:28

    nice play on words

    you'd have to give a tutorial some day on the style you use

    really nice

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  10. Blogoratti19 February 2010 at 20:12

    @Anon: Why thank you for stopping by, appreciate that.

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  11. Jennifer A.19 February 2010 at 20:24

    I'm currently watching season 1 of LOST, and this is too cliche. Lol.

    Lovely write-up as usual :)

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  12. Blogoratti19 February 2010 at 20:34

    @Jaycee: I thought LOST was awesome!
    Thank you very much. Glad you approve..and hey I see you :)

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  13. Miss Natural19 February 2010 at 22:09

    awww as in i wish all it took was a pendant to get the guy of my dreams. as usual very lovely

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  14. Blogoratti19 February 2010 at 22:31

    @Miss Natural: Aww that would nice wouldn't it,hehe. Gracias.

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  15. Anonymous19 February 2010 at 23:27

    This is nice what a compliment to write a poem about someone...

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  16. histreasure20 February 2010 at 02:38

    really love..as usual..few words yet deep..

    have a nice wkend, blogo

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  17. bob-ij20 February 2010 at 03:42

    hmmm..."And lots more that i eyed." ....so suggestive.
    Is the "pendant on your neck" her heart, or am I just getting carried away?
    Too sweet...she really is a lucky chick.
    Don't worry, I'll be back to twitter before you know it. Just trying to focus...

    ~x~

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  18. Blogoratti20 February 2010 at 05:57

    @Suru: Much love, thank you.

    @histreasure: Glad you like,you are far too kind. Enjoy your weekend-and have fun.

    @bob-ij: ..'Is the "pendant on your neck" her heart'?
    Hmmn you may be onto something there dimples,wink*
    Okay seen. Be on the lookout for you on twitter then..keep your head up. Much Luv.

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  19. Femme Lounge24 February 2010 at 23:56

    hmmnn!the thing around her neck!

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  20. Formerly stealth reader26 February 2010 at 20:47

    i love the line
    "a duet of unspoken emotions aloud"
    nice

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  21. Blogoratti26 February 2010 at 21:19

    @Femme Lounge: Yes !!!

    @Formerly stealth reader: Appreciate that. Nice seeing you on here*

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