So Long

Blogoratti September 23, 2011

Quote of the day:
Fiction reveals truths that reality obscures.
-Jessamyn West


At the far end of the room.
Black colored chairs leaning against white walls.

There you were all alone.
A little red rose growing in concrete.

I longed to touch your petals.
To feel them against my fingers.

To inhale your scent.
And let the smell linger.

Soft and vulnerable.
So detailed yet so beautiful.

I took a few steps your way.
Ready to take you far away.

But alas, someone else came along.
I was too late...all i can say is -so long.


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11 Comments

  1. Myne23 September 2011 at 18:33

    Hmmm...say hello before you say goodbye comes to mind.

    Have a great weekend blogo.

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  2. TheRustGeek23 September 2011 at 19:00

    The downside of over thinking stuff? Nice one...

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  3. bob-ij23 September 2011 at 19:33

    oh.....that's so sad! #Lesson Live in the moment! Have an awesome weekend mars!

    ~x~

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  4. Rhapsody Phoenix24 September 2011 at 04:01

    hmmmmmmm......
    too late, too late shall be the cry.

    have a fabulous one...
    rhapsody
    http://twitter.com/rhapsodyphoenix

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  5. Jabez24 September 2011 at 06:14

    Tragic!

    Nice one,:)

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  6. Unknown24 September 2011 at 08:42

    wow!...so sweet but sad....emotions painted with crystal words!..hmm...the line: "But alas, someone else came along. I was too late...all i can say is -so long"...reminds me of my poem "Too Late"

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  7. raindropsonarose24 September 2011 at 12:23

    Aww. Beautiful...but very sad.

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  8. Blogoratti24 September 2011 at 15:44

    @everyone: Many thanks guys, for your comments. Nice weekend!!

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  9. Anonymous26 September 2011 at 13:12

    Nice one

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  10. Anonymous26 September 2011 at 13:13

    Nice one

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  11. Anonymous26 September 2011 at 13:14

    Nice one

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